Mount and Blade fan fic

Apparently I'm not the first person to attempt Mount & Blade fan fiction. I found this example on a forum.

Sharow stood on the hill looking down at the field of battle. She watched the river of blood draining down the valley wondering if it was enough to drown those few still alive. She wished there moans and screams would soon be silenced so she could think.The thought didn't even take her by surprise. So few of her men had fallen that none of those pain filled voices could come from any one but those who had tried to kill her. She never wished pain on anyone but nor did she feel the need to be sorry for those who brought it on them selves.

"A grate victory" the voice cut across her thoughts and she looked up to see nazir "you must have been deep in though to let me sneak up on you like that" he finished seeing the look in her eyes. She silently reprimanded her self before smiling back up at the man.

"Yes" she said "I don't think even you expected this when you signed on" none of us did she thought as he sat down next to her.

"Maybe not this but i could see you where going to lead us to grate things" he paused looking up at her as she sat to join him "just how grate remains to be seen"

Epic.